the twisted road finds dark corners
twigs snapping beneath
the softest of
footfalls, fear
creeps damp, cold
the sense of not being
quite alone, like sweat clinging close
but this is no
horror story, not
a journey of fear
listen, follow step into the space
around the bend
where light bursts forth
according to plan
in exactly 55 words
18 comments:
smiles...that is a nice sense of not being alone for sure...round that corner and run for the light...smiles.
loved the drama in this... beautiful write
absolutely a great write - Mosk
That would be a nice turn then, hopefully into the light ~
Yes, always move towards the light.
I like the progression from fear to relief. So good to finally 'see the light.' Nice one.
Sometimes it's really hard to find that light, but it's sure worth the wait.
not being alone ... even when one is on their own - is a blessing.
Love that in the end, we are all just telling stories
i like how the mood turns by stepping into the light...
Very inspirational!!
Welcome to the Friday Funfest, I hope you found this to be challenging and Fun!
Loved your beautiful 55
Thanks for playing, and please have a Kick Ass Week-End
From fear to light; a very reassuring progression. Nicely expressed!
Wonderful writing.
A walk of faith. Nicely done!
ah, lovely - glad i took that final step with you... i liked that you added that bit about it not being a horror story
A lovely relief in those footsteps..
Glad to have turned the corner with you - the anticipation is so often worse than the reality of what lies ahead.
The plan, the plan, the plan, nice focus here!
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