03 September 2013

walls coming down

walls stand
against the hammer
stubborn they resist 
the falling but
freedom waits
rising from the 
dust breathing in
new life
possibilities unleashed



back at the bar for another poetry shot

 

13 comments:

Kate Mia said...

Unfinished walls hold promise...

KChripczuk said...

Great last line.

Brian Miller said...

smiles....def new possibilities await once we bring down the walls that keep us....

Mary said...

Love the ideas of new possibilities....I think we can find them everywhere!

Heaven said...

I like the possibilities, just don't like the cleaning after, smiles ~

Claudia said...

yep - def. they make room for new things if we manage to break down these walls...

Björn said...

Definitely so that wall confines us from possibilities

Mary said...

Who knows what can be built in its place once the wall is brought down!!

whocouldknowthen said...

yes, those old walsl can be stubborn, and sometimes a little frightening but it's usually worth the mess once you're done.....

joanna said...

what a wonderful message for the start of a new day! thank you for sharing!

lovemorestudio said...

Knocking down walls-- a great metaphor in life-- and one of my favorite construction jobs as well! ~peace, Jason

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

I love the idea of finding promise here!

Denise said...

Wonderful writing.

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