slowly, waiting
on the edge
of unexplained tears
for the new thing
He promises
Lake light
shimmers
as the sun dies
in thirst quenching beauty
Water holding secrets
never to be told.
Joining others at dverse - the poet's pub for Saturday Poetics where today's prompt was water
15 comments:
great to see you at dverse....water does hold secrets for sure...esp the living water eh? smiles.
Love not only the imagery in the poem but the depth of spiritual meaning.
Oh what secrets the water holds…
Bless you
~ Debra
http://debrasblogpureandsimple.blogspot.com/2011/07/why-god-made-snails.html
Loved the combo of tears and lake water... and trust incorporated in this piece.
oh how I want to know those secrets! sometimes I get tired of waiting. this is beautiful...thank you.
Those secrets, never shared -- never spoken, never realized. Good poem, Karin.
as the sun dies in thirst quenching beauty, what a great line
love these lines...
"as the sun dies
in thirst quenching beauty
Water holding secrets
never to be told"
Nice to meet you~
The submerged secrets can create spiritual turbulence...He calms rough seas though given the chance.
Amen
Some soothing lines
Thankyou
waiting for the new thing he promises
This is beautiful...
A lovely ablution.
Water holding secrets--yes, the secret to life. Lovely words here.
Beautiful words..
lovely thank you for sharing
Beautiful, stirring and full of emotion. Those tears... thankfully he knows each one. Blessings on you like rain.
Left wondering of the things he promised...
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