The prompt last week was Blue Suede Shoes
"Pick a shoe and put it in a poem, with a little music on the side.
Black heels. Brown loafers. Red sneakers.
Okay, or those blue suede shoes. Rock us."
This is what poured forth:
Traffic in July
steam of summer
sizzled on concrete
sun kissed skin
sweat slicked hair
music throbbing
through open windows
bare feet tapping
rock jazz fusion
low spark of high
heeled boys
never too hot
to be cool
Go ahead and have a listen, the strains transport me back to the early 1970's, in a good way!
10 comments:
Fun post.
I really enjoyed "never too hot to be cool." That statement says it all.
True....what a cool and smooth jazz music, smiles ~
ha. fun rhythm in this...and the allit works really well....summer sizzle concrete sun...love that bit...
First time here, Firefly, and I loved this answer to the jazz prompt! Hey, any era will do, and Miles was rockin' the high heeled boots in those days. Love the sizzle - not just in the poem, but in the feel of the whole piece. Amy
never too hot
to be cool...ha smiles...would work the other way round as well you know...smiles
Great music - I can hear it. Never too hot to be cool -- like it much!
Nice rhythm! I too liked the "never to cool to be hot".
Cool jazz rock fusion... definitely something that would make me happy... Love King Crimson also...
This is rockin' and cool. Nicely melded!
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