this season of
the shortest days
the velvet dark deeper
than memory
recalls
a hole that pulls you in
fingers harsh, cold
muffled but not
silent
don't linger long
for there are gifts barely
hidden
how He scatters snow
like lace, the thick
and thin
creating space
for glory revealed
without apology
prompted by tweetspeak poetryand hanging out at the pub


Love this. Great photo. And as always wonderfully crafted lines!
ReplyDeleteThis is so lovely. How wonderful to share the beauty at a time when so many struggle to see it.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
glory revealed without apology...smiles....scattering lace...there is always beauty and treasure to be found...even in the dark...
ReplyDeleteglory revealed without apology...i like that... being winter - being what it is - no excuses - there's beauty in this
ReplyDeleteWhen i see the Sun peek in on a cold blue day..
ReplyDeleteit's just as exciting..to see as the birth
of a newborn child...
Life is what it reminds me of
brave..and never fully
gone as long as it is
living.
Glad you picked up the TSP monthly theme. Nice sense of music in this poem.
ReplyDeleteThe lace of winter snow... we know that beauty will grow underneath... love that
ReplyDeleteyes... what would we know of light without first the darkness... lovely imagery!
ReplyDeletewithout apology! Love that ending.
ReplyDeleteGlory revealed without apology - I like this very much! Shows the action of God as he is....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem! I always feel Nature is the place to witness God's glory, whatever the season.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed this... "Glory revealed without apology" Wish I'd written that!
ReplyDeleteScatter snow like lace, revealed without apology - I specially like this part ~ Beautiful verses ~
ReplyDeletebeautiful pic... and i liked the snow as lace and the hidden meaning
ReplyDeleteKarin, your words are unceasingly beautiful....
ReplyDeletenice tree lace effect
ReplyDeleteSuch good writing.
ReplyDeleteThe photo of snow laced through the trees and the show of His glory without apology is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI felt pulled in to the cold hole and then redeemed.
ReplyDeleteyes, that final couplet is outstanding ~
ReplyDeleteoh how beautiful!
ReplyDelete"The velvet dark, deeper than memory recalls" This is a stunning piece.
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