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10 November 2010

Enough Fog

Fog settles
here
a blanket not
warm
or welcomed
but thick with dark
as if morning
can not quite
begin.

Damp hovers
between
almost warm
and the freezing point.

I wait
not quite patiently
for clarity
decisiveness.
Yes
even if snow
shouts victory.


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7 comments:

  1. this is enchanting....


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  2. I endured a foggy day yesterday, so this really hit home. (I'm also not always exactly patient)

    Nice One Shot!

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  3. I hate to think about it, snow shouting victory. But yes, that would be so much better than the damp and fog. Love this poem!

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  4. There are days that fog here is like a white out.

    I love the way the fog becomes a presence in you poem

    Thanks for sharing with One Shot

    Moon Smiles for your clear day

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  5. i like your poem..there are two kinds of fog i always think...and it may has to do with my own soul's condition...one that wrapps you in white blanket like a friend and the one that prevents you to see...

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  6. Its very beautiful. I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for sharing...


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